Do you think gay people should be allowed to be married?
Well if you said yes then why is gay marriage illegal in certain places?
I personally think that gay people should be allowed to get married. In this essay,
I will be talking about why gay people should be allowed to marry, how gay people got
treated when they married when they weren't supposed too and how did they get over the
fact they couldn't marry.
I will be talking about why gay people should be allowed to marry, how gay people got
treated when they married when they weren't supposed too and how did they get over the
fact they couldn't marry.
The first thing I am going to state is why gay people should be allowed to marry.
I think they should be aloud to marry because its complety there choice and no one should be
aloud to change that. I think this is where homophobia fits in. one of the many reasons why one
person of any gender is homophobic because they are gay, bi, lesbian, etc but dont know how to
come out. If straight people are aloud to marry why arent gay people aloud to. Straight people are
basically the same people except they like the same gender and they have a certain name.
I think they should be aloud to marry because its complety there choice and no one should be
aloud to change that. I think this is where homophobia fits in. one of the many reasons why one
person of any gender is homophobic because they are gay, bi, lesbian, etc but dont know how to
come out. If straight people are aloud to marry why arent gay people aloud to. Straight people are
basically the same people except they like the same gender and they have a certain name.
The second thing that i will be staing is how gay people get treated when they get married when
they are not surpose to. In certain places if they married they would be put in jail to say “hey not
your not aloud to be married to garry because hes the same gender as you” * just an example*. Gay
men were torurted as some men have said that they were arrested and tourtured. They were have
said that they were threatened with a fake crimes and fake charges wrong.
they are not surpose to. In certain places if they married they would be put in jail to say “hey not
your not aloud to be married to garry because hes the same gender as you” * just an example*. Gay
men were torurted as some men have said that they were arrested and tourtured. They were have
said that they were threatened with a fake crimes and fake charges wrong.
Hi Chyna,your essay is neatly set out with paragraphs. WELL DONE.I absolutely agree with your argument. I also believe that gay people should be allowed to marry someone with the same sex. It's really sad that they are excluded and charged with fake crimes and charges. Their also human! Next time you could add a paragraph 3 and a conclusion to wrap your persuasive essay up. Your work is easy to read but with some spelling errors. All and all nice job.
ReplyDeleteHi Chyna,
ReplyDeleteYour organization is great and you have a rhetorical question to hook the audience.
It was interesting to read your thoughts on homophobia. It reminded me of Karofsky from the Glee episode we watched in term 1.
I hope you find the time to finish this off :)